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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, December 6, 2018

pet day

Kia ora on November the 9th we had Pet Day and we did some vaseline saucers.  We had to make a pattern with flower petals and you get prizes for the best. This is my flower plate I did.

Christmas Venn Diagram

Kia ora, for the week we have been talking about doing venn diagram's about comparing Christmas.  We made one. We could pick a country and I picked NewZealand and Sweden. This is my venn diagram that I did and I hope you like it.

dinner

Kia ora last night we had our dinner for the year sixes. Next year we will all be going to College. I was only allowed to take 2 people with me and I took my Mum and Dad. We got given a taonga and yearbook. This is my photo from the night.

Friday, November 2, 2018

earphones vs computer


Kia Ora
This week we read a book called the legend of Rock, Paper, Scissors. It was very funny. Then we had to write out own comic strip. Here is my work:


Wednesday, October 31, 2018

Explanation writing

Kia Ora

Yesterday we were working on a writing test about environmental problems. 
Here is my work:



Name: Mosese
Explanation Writing - Term 4

Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.

Think about:
  • What your reader needs to know about the topic
  • How you are going to introduce the topic
  • The order of your ideas and how you link them
  • What to include in your summary

Remember to:
  • Choose your words carefully
  • Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work


Start Writing Here:

I am writing 3 thing that we can take away environmental means rubbish all over our schools and land and it is making our world sick so this is three thing I wrote to help out.

One thing that we can do is every day at school we can go out and pick up rubbish .for about ten minutes. And that will probably pick up over One hundred rubbish a day.

second thing that you could do is to have rubbish bins around our schools for lunch rubbish. When people will just be too lazy to walk to their bay so they would just sneak it behind a tree or in a bush and that will just make more rubbish around our schools.


Thirdly we could start eating inside so that after we are done it will be easy for us to see the rubbish. And that will make no more rubbish outside in our wonderland.


So come on people stop throwing rubbish on the your just making our world sick and please agree to my three things to do with our school.

















Thursday, October 18, 2018

Grandparents

Kia ora this is an explanation I have written about coping with eye site for your grandparents. We wrote these because it is our Greats and Grans day on Friday.

Tuesday, September 25, 2018

Factul recount

This is my share factul slide that I did with my friends and the ski trip was so fun.

Monday, September 24, 2018

Ski Trip Diary


This is my personal recount about everything we did down at the ski trip and it was amazing

Thursday, August 2, 2018

Adventure story

Kia Ora
my name is Mosese and my class has been working on our Adventure story for the past few weeks.




Smoosh, smoosh went my feet as I ran through a puddle bare footed. I set up my tent beside bumpy rocks. I couldn't feel my feet. They were like ice blocks in a freezer. I hopped into my tent to rub my feet dry. Then I started to hear someone scratching on soaking-wet bark. I looked out my tent and saw a creepy, wrinkly old man. He was muttering, “Ooga Booga man is coming!”  Then he disappeared into nowhere.

I jumped back into my  tent but then I started getting goosebumps. Then I started hearing more footsteps. They were getting closer and closer. Could it be the Ooga Booga man for real?. I got my pocket knife out. I could feel sweat dripping down my face. Then sharp claws started to rip my tent open ……..and then

Monday, June 11, 2018

My speech

Kia Ora Everyone
We have been working on our speeches for the last couple of weeks. We had to make them between 2 and 3 minutes.
I chose the topic illegal drugs and I had to write an argument giving reasons why they are bad for you.


Introduction/Belief statement:
Have you ever taken illegal drugs? There are many illegal drugs that are being abused by our society today. Drugs such as marijuana, and  cocaine and much more. Illegal drugs are a massive problem world wide leading to mental illness, poverty and even death. I believe that illegal drug use needs to stop. I want you to understand my reasons that follow.
Reason 1:
Firstly, illegal drugs are everywhere now and are causing lots of problems in our communities. Drugs affect user’s families and could harm their kids. If somebody's having a baby and she's smoking and doing drugs the baby might die. People even start stealing money from their families because they will use that money to buy drugs. Do you remember how awful you felt the last time your kid got sick? How much worse would you feel if your child got sick because of your stupid drug habit.
Reason 2: You could end up homeless because your family kicked you out and you do not want to be out on the streets all alone. You will have nowhere to live and you will have to eat out of the rubbish bins and you would not like that. Where would you live? You won’t be allowed to sleep in a nice warm bed instead you will be living in a dog house.
Reason 3:
It is likely that if you use illegal drugs you will eventually die. Drugs cause 32 deaths each year in NZ. You would not want that to happen to anyone you care about, would you?. Some drugs can even kill you instantly and you don’t even know what’s in them.
Conclusion:
So I’m sure  you will absolutely agree with me that illegal drugs are bad. If no one on our planet took illegal drugs, everyone’s children would grow up healthy and safe, we’d all live in nice, comfy homes and no one’s life will get wasted by dying young.  STOP! Don’t use illegal drugs. We want a safe and happy community and no one wants to be homeless and nobody wants to be dead. Grow up and have a good life!

Friday, May 11, 2018

Environmental writing

Kia ora.
We are learning how to create descriptive pieces of writing by using our senses to make close observations of our environment. We sat outside and drew what we observed and wrote words that came to our heads. We used these words to write.

Thursday, March 15, 2018

Than similes

Kia ora

We have been learning how to write different kinds of similes. Here are my 'than' similes.



Friday, February 9, 2018

Poetry 1

Learn: The difference between prose and poetry.
Create: A DLO which shows short texts sorted  into two groups; prose or poetry
and which includes at least one image.



Friday, August 4, 2017

Learning how to write reports about a scientific experiment.

Kia ora.
We are having a science fair this term so we needed to learn how to write a report about a scientific experiment. Our teachers chopped a piece of scientific writing into bits and we had to sort them out into the right order. We had to match the structure clues with the correct sentences and paragraphs. It was tricky. When we were finished we used the report to carry out a floating and sinking experiment using Blutack.The Blutack wouldn’t float unless we squeezed  it into the shape of a boat. It was fun. Here is a picture.

Monday, June 19, 2017

My speech

Safety
 We have been working on our speech. Hope you enjoy it.

*Kaboosh!* He has crashed! Without a helmet! His head is bleeding badly! Hi my name is Mosese  today I am going to talk about helmets and why they are good to have them on your  head.   

Firstly, you need a helmet because you can get hurt if you fall off bikes, rollerskates or skateboards.
And if you are doing tricks you can get hurt bad if the bike lands on your head and it’s not good on concrete. 900 people die each year on bicycles. 75% of accidents are from head injuries.

Secondly, it can save your life on a motorbike when you crash because motorbikes are faster, so crashes can be more dangerous. And the engines can explode. It reduces the risk of head injuries.  Wearing a helmet while participating in activities like bicycle riding or motorcycle riding can drastically lessen the chance of suffering a serious brain injury.... Bike helmets and motorcycle helmets can prevent life changing head injuries.
   
Finally, you should wear helmets on a quad bikes on the farm. Cause the bike can land on your head and kill you. In 2016 there were
over 343 people killed by farm bikes in New Zealand.


SO that’s why everybody should wear a helmet when you are riding bikes, motorbikes and farm bikes. Helmets protect your head from getting hurt if you fall off. Head injuries can lead to brain damage so protect your head!

Friday, June 2, 2017

Rambo

Kia ora,

Today we had an animal onesie day because we are fundraising for the year 1&2 zoo trip.
Our group dressed up as Rambo. Rambo is a boy and he's in the army and he's a human.