We have been learning how to write narratives. Here is a narrative I have written.
Beyond a Village
Beyond a Village
Beyond a village was a forest that was hard to see because it was invisible. It was a spooky forest. And it was haunted too.
In the forest there were dwarfs as big as me. As I walked through the forest I could see big black bats the size of my body flying around. And I could hear fat hungry wolves howling, showing their sharp teeth ready to eat me. I was only a kid but I was so strong.
The wolf headed towards me I started defending him off but he ate me with his sharp teeth. I was trapped in his stomach.
Suddenly I remember that I had my pocket knife. I cut his stomach with the sharp silver blade and the wolf died. There was blood pouring everywhere and guts falling out from the cut that I made.
That evening I created a fire and cut the wolf into fat juicy steaks. I cooked them up and ate him for dinner.
kia ora Mosese,
ReplyDeleteI really like your post you have done and I really liked reading it and, next time can you please add a picture so that I know what your
writing about.
How did it feel like writing about beyond a village.
By Anastasia
how do you pronounce your name from mosese
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