Yesterday we were working on a writing test about environmental problems.
Here is my work:
Name: Mosese
Explanation Writing - Term 4
Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.
Think about:
- What your reader needs to know about the topic
- How you are going to introduce the topic
- The order of your ideas and how you link them
- What to include in your summary
Remember to:
- Choose your words carefully
- Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
- Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work
Start Writing Here:
I am writing 3 thing that we can take away environmental means rubbish all over our schools and land and it is making our world sick so this is three thing I wrote to help out.
One thing that we can do is every day at school we can go out and pick up rubbish .for about ten minutes. And that will probably pick up over One hundred rubbish a day.
second thing that you could do is to have rubbish bins around our schools for lunch rubbish. When people will just be too lazy to walk to their bay so they would just sneak it behind a tree or in a bush and that will just make more rubbish around our schools.
Thirdly we could start eating inside so that after we are done it will be easy for us to see the rubbish. And that will make no more rubbish outside in our wonderland.
So come on people stop throwing rubbish on the your just making our world sick and please agree to my three things to do with our school.
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