Autumn Cameo

Written Language Sample

Cameo

Learning Intention: I am learning how to use appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo writing.

Success Criteria: I am able to find and highlight adjectives and verbs in a cameo and explain why they work.

I am able to write sentences with appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs in my cameo.

Task:  To write a poem about autumn, using appropriate adjectives and powerful verbs.

Remember to:  Punctuate your work correctly.

        Use careful spelling and sounding out

WINTER

Winter blows its cold icy breath everywhere.

The early morning frost is crunchy and white covering the green grass.

The loud wind howls in the freezing air like a stray dog hungry for a bone.
Tiny snowflakes flutter down to land on the frozen ground,

covering everything with a white sparkling blanket.

The trees become bare, brown bones standing like statues admiring the view.

Heavy rain falls from the dark grey sky, pounding against the soggy ground.

Chilly bitterness in the air, winter is here.

Here is my writing!

Autumn - DRAFT

The cold icy morning greets you. The big tree’s freezing leaves fall down to the ground. I jump off the trees into the pile of colourful leaves. It was so much fun in Autumn The leaves ternd black and yellow. They were so colourful like a butterfly.

Autumn - Published The cold icy morning greets you. The big tree’s freezing leaves fall down to the ground. I jump off the tree into a pile of colourful leaves. It is so much fun in Autumn. The leaves turned brown and yellow. They are so colourful like a butterfly.