“Yee haa!!!!” I shouted. The people stood like soldiers all around. I could hear screaming and yelling. It was surrounding us everywhere. First we got our tickets before we went and played. Then I saw Crystal and Rico. It was so much fun. I raced to the cup game. “Go Mosese,” yelled Lio. I got a chocolate and a dinosaur pen. Finally it was time for the prizes but I didn’t win anything. Maybe next year we might win something. “It’s time to go home,” said Mum and Dad. I said bye to my friends. I had so much fun.
Friday, April 15, 2016
Easter
Here is a recount about Easter. I think it is good because I have fullstops and speech marks in the right place.
“Yee haa!!!!” I shouted. The people stood like soldiers all around. I could hear screaming and yelling. It was surrounding us everywhere. First we got our tickets before we went and played. Then I saw Crystal and Rico. It was so much fun. I raced to the cup game. “Go Mosese,” yelled Lio. I got a chocolate and a dinosaur pen. Finally it was time for the prizes but I didn’t win anything. Maybe next year we might win something. “It’s time to go home,” said Mum and Dad. I said bye to my friends. I had so much fun.
“Yee haa!!!!” I shouted. The people stood like soldiers all around. I could hear screaming and yelling. It was surrounding us everywhere. First we got our tickets before we went and played. Then I saw Crystal and Rico. It was so much fun. I raced to the cup game. “Go Mosese,” yelled Lio. I got a chocolate and a dinosaur pen. Finally it was time for the prizes but I didn’t win anything. Maybe next year we might win something. “It’s time to go home,” said Mum and Dad. I said bye to my friends. I had so much fun.
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